Yet Another Update: Skateboard 2008

Heres what I have so far

Update: Skateboard 2008

Suggestions from Howards GD 2 class
-Move black stuff out of the guys mouth
- initial reason for the stuff coming out of the mouth was the idea of visible noise (reason behind all the splatter) and trying to connect it without be too obvious but if it hinders the aesthetic quality of the piece then so be it i'll move it.

- Cityscape needed to be bolder.
Wasn't sure about this with the piece being busy enough or so I thought. After adding the grey washed look I believe it was a good move and helps push the piece further

Future thoughts - Darker grey cityscape to push depth back even further and give the piece a foreground, middle ground and background.

P.s. thanks for the feedback its quite possibly the most important thing to create a great piece of work

Update: Skateboard 2008

Cityscape?

Skateboard 2008

Design I'm working on for Mr. Howard

Seed

You tell the story and the meaning behind it, mine are boring

Update: Art & Design

-Added chapter like pages
-Changed the quotes so they're not as dominant
-Laid out some of the concentrations differently in alphabetical order